avidrosette: The Expanse's Chrisjen Avasarala looking contemplative, resting chin on hand, flooded with golden light. Created by colls. (avasarala enlightened by colls)
avidrosette ([personal profile] avidrosette) wrote in [community profile] jukebox_fest 2024-02-19 08:59 pm (UTC)

Ooh, nice! Clever choice to take the pov of characters who can smell the ghostly perfume - the next generation of smugglers. I love how sensual you make this, describing the notes of the perfume and the feel of the silk. And I like the smugglers' debate over whether those sensual luxuries and the money that comes from trafficking them is worth their (inevitable?) doom. Are they following the forbidden scent to their imprisonment or death? You leave us hanging in the best of ways. Great fill, anon!

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